A very good poem when you consider the limitations of the form. Very clever refrain though I personally have never enjoyed absinthe. Not my preferred drink of choice. The rhythm is generally good, only the "don't let an opportune chance squander" line sticks out as feeling a little bit forced, but considering what you had to work with, very good indeed.
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