\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED ITEMS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/brittanyv2015
Review Requests: OFF
15 Public Reviews Given
15 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by brittanyV1 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
i thought this was really good, it was happy and sad at the same time, the first part i could connect to but i also could connect to the second part because its aweful losing someone you love, i really liked the line that said "yime seperated us or was it fate"
2
2
Review by brittanyV1 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i can really feel the emotion in this poem and for it to be your fisrt is really good. it has that feeling that you never want to lose that one person you love because it will destroy you, i really liked this.
2 Reviews • *Magnify*
Page of 1 • 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/brittanyv2015