I love this so much its so relatable especially with everything going on right now. Beautiful and amazing. This is perfect people need to be aware of serious this is and I appreciate hearing from your perspective. Would love to hear more and don't be afraid to reach out if you would ever like to go over ideas with each other.
This was so enchanting and beautifully written a few mistakes but this was so great to read I'm definitely going to read the rest. It captivated me from the very start. Especially for someone who loves to read as much as I do I can say that this definitely going to be an A+ for me.
I loved this I think with a little revising this will be a good foundation for whatever your planning. This so amazing I like the inner dialogue it made it seem like I was right there watching this girl go through a crisis and seeing every action she was doing. Amazing story don't stop writing I enjoyed this so much would definitely want to read more.
I love this it's very relatable but not in a way that it happened to everyone, but I do think it is a fear to have to get to this level of life. I appreciation the repetition it makes the theme of the poem into something very real and vivid. It's like I can picture this in my head and see it all in motion even though there isn't a lot of words I still see it clearly.
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