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Review of Permeation  
Review by bwbb123
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is very good detailed, consise and very nail biting or that's what my English Teacher said after leaving it in class.

But more to the point, I thought that it was very good and that I want more stories like this and I would like to see you have a go at a story within this specification:

It has to be set in Afghanistan
It has to be with 2 People that are trying to kill a man that is trying to take over the world.
They must also be at the same time trying to kill a person that got them Disavowed from an Elite Taskforce because they know a secret that no-one else knows about him
and
They must in the End Kill both of them 1 by hanging them and the other with a throwing knofe to the eye.

If you could with detail and quality that would be really good and you would be a brilliant writer for thinling up something along those lines with immense detail and consiscion.
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by bwbb123
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It is a very good read I could not find anything wrong with it and I gave it a 4.5 because the quality of the story could be better.

Maybe just make it a little shorter because I started to lose interest in the story.

Other than those remarks Trick or Tweet is a very good read.

Keep writing on
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