I can feel your anguish in the words. I sense a sadness which you hope to never experience again...but probably will, because that is life sometimes. Your friends are blessed to have a friend like you, one who cares about them.
I would suggest creating space between some of the lines...sort of break it up a bit. For instance, it seems that there is a natural break after every 8th line as I read your piece, where you could begin a new stanza/paragraph.
I am not sure what 'sarrow' is...but, if you are referring to a name/noun, it should be capitalized. Also, did you mean 'which' instead of 'witch'? I noticed a couple of possible spelling errors.
You wrote from your heart and that is soooo important.
Keep up the good work!
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