Hey Brian mate. Loved the poem. Very interesting use of rhyme and beautiful imagery painted with your words. We have a very different idea of how poetry should be conducted but that's the beauty of life. So many different colours in the rainbow I always get excited when I come across a new one. Keep it up mate. Nice work.
Wow powerful stuff and beautiful use of words. Still left wondering as to what exactly went through your mind as you wrote this lovely piece of art. "The music of an outside world Hardly seeps through glazed glass" really was the highlight of the poem for me but the whole experience was something to behold. Keep writing Madeleine you are going places.
Beautiful and spectacular. I got goosebumps reading this. God truly is great. I am inspired by this so very much. I am so glad you have faith on this level. When you feel God's omnipresence you know that everything is being taken care of. Although it may not always appear that way God is always with us... All the time. I don't know you but I get the sense that you are a brilliant human being destined for big things. Thank you for your review and don't give up on writing mate. Cheers :)
Wow that was quite the roller coaster of emotion. Its sad to hear that was a true story but I guess that's life. Feel sorry for the fella even though he might've been an unsavory character never like it when that stuff happens to anyone. But that being said fantastically written and extremely well set up for the ending. Loved the use of not someTHING but someONE. But yeah tragedy is as much a part of life as comedy I guess. Can't deny it. But well done mate. You are a great writer. :)
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