Good writing! Love this poem about dreams. I liked your choice of words too. This peice sounds like a scene from a really good movie. I like the way the words flow, very smoothly.Please continue rewarding your readers with good solid writing like this peice. Im giving this one 4.5!
Hi Quill Mistress! Till You loved me to the core, is down right beautiful! While I was reading your words, I felt very happy. You and your wife are very fortunate that you truly love each other. Have you ever thought about putting your words to actual music? This would make for a great song! Keep uplifting your readers with your writing!You get a perfect 5.0 rating!
Hi Alexandria Lee. I enjoyed reading your peice, "A death in the family" very much. You show so much feeling and emotion in every word! Your short story is simply beautiful! I was moved to tears before I could finish reading it. Your words flowed so easily and, I could visualize the entire story. You are a very talented writer. Please continue writing beautiful peice's like this one! You get a perfect 5.0 rating from me!
Thumbs are definetly up for this T.L. Finch! I gave you a perfect score of 5 points. "The web" is a very beautiful and yet deep poem. I like your style of writing very much. You have a lot of talent. I liked how you compared life to a spider web, and how there different but the same. This poem definetly makes you think. Keep writing because I am definetly a fan of your work! signed, candy
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