Very emotional piece of work. Makes you think of things occuring in the world at this moment in time. This piece of work questions the motives of the human race and brings in God at the same time. Sometimes it is not God to blame for the things that are wrong in our world, but we must take some responsability for this wrong. We must all be socially responsibile.
Excellent piece of work. Thought provoking words about how life can be so uncaring and more relient on materiallism. If more people thought like this then we would be able to turn the world around to a better place to live in. Looking forward to reading you next poem. Cath
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