Wow, it's a very nice story! I liked the twist at the end. When I read it the first time, I wanted to suggest that you expand it, and I thought that it would be better if it was bigger. But then I re-read it and decided against it, it's perfect as it is, I think the fact that it's so short makes it so good. Curt and to the point. I really hope you continue writing, flash fiction and more!