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Review by Cecilia O'Malley
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was very captivating! Your phrasing and dialogue are very easy to read.

Keep doing what you're doing!

-Cecilia O'Malley
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Review by Cecilia O'Malley
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is really well written! I'm very curious as to the inside of the heavy box.
The dark aura of this story is very obvious, I just want to ask one thing. There are heavy elements of childish fun, do you want them there? If so, great! If not, I would watch your phrasing in some of the paragraphs.

Keep it up!
-Cecilia O'Malley
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Review by Cecilia O'Malley
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is really good! It reads like a myth or folktale, so I hope that's what you were going for!
Keep writing
-Cecilia O'Malley
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