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Rated: E | (3.5)
This short story made me chuckle in a few parts, and I thought the main character was really relatable. It did have a few grammatical errors, but not so many that it was distracting to the storyline. I'm assuming that the character was successful in his risky investment, although the ending did seem a little incomplete to me. It did entertain me and keep my attention, and I really like the moral of the story, which I took as: The bigger the risk, the higher your success. Most of the time those risks fail, but every once in a while...you have success.
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