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Review of Imagine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's different and very smooth I liked a lot!!!
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Review of The Voice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it a lot
it reminded me of my best friend and you think what would happen if he or she did die?
keep up the writing?
-Chankleta
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Review of Despair  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
woah that piece was beautiful I liked it a bunch maybe you should consider making it longer, there's nothing wrong with it now but if it was a little longer then you will have people crying
SOME IDEAS:
"Life is so unfair
The rich get richer and the poor (get) disgraced
(People get killed because of a different race) THEN
Is religion the answer?"
Just to Try to make it longer maybe you should speak more about religion
and how it has affected you in any kind of way
Keep up the writing!!!!
-Chankleta
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The beginning was a little weak but as you went through it got stronger but as a whole the poem was interesting, keep up the writing
-Chankleta
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