Thank you for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it. I seen one error in the beginning. You have
" Here, let me help you place it on the fridge." I think you mean in the fridge. Overall it is a nice holiday story.
Sorry I couldn't finish the story I keep getting confused in the setting. I think that the setting was a gaming business but then the story seem to drift to what seemed more like a whorhouse setting and back to what seemed like they were in a business. I think what I read was good but the setting is where I can't keep up.
I think that if you text and drive you should be held responsible for you actions. You made the choice to get on your phone and you know there's a chance that you could cause a accident. It's my opinion that if you are old enough to have a driver's license then you are also old enough to take responsibility for your choice to get on the phone. There is always to choice to pull over in a parking lot or other safe place to check your message or whatever it is that you need to do on your phone making it safer for yourself as well as everyone else.
It grabbed my attention and keep it because the wonder of what happened to grandma which I didn't find but then the new question keep me reading. What will they find when that box up Grandmas room.The sadness at the being switches to laughter showing that there can be a smile even when there is a loss.