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Review of Stare-master  
Review by Chico Mahalo
Rated: E | (3.5)
As I sit here, at least 40 lbs. overweight (too much drinking), I know that dude; he lives next to me, and you can never overestimate the focus on women and men who are out-of-focus. It's a pleasant little diddy from my perspective. Keep putting pen to paper and be well!
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Review by Chico Mahalo
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an excellent read. Your details are shapely, conjuring up a lifetime lived. I've always felt there was a relationship between weather and our moods. (Of course, there is.) But I like the way rain intermingles with your thoughts. I can feel your passion in this episode. However dark your feelings are, the narrative has a hopeful strain. That's moving and bold. Nicely penned, Barbara. Be well!
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