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Review by B.P. Shelley
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I’ll start out by saying that I am definitely not the intended audience of this fan fic, my experience with these characters being limited entirely to Yu-Gi-Oh the Abridged Series on YouTube. That being said, your dialogue writing is fantastic. I especially liked reading Seto’s lines which seemed very true to the character, as far as I’ve seen in the abridged series at least. So great job! Like I said, the story itself isn’t for me, but you clearly know the characters and how to write them.
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