Jimbo: I really loved this piece! It is very cute and whimsical, a child-like "tail"! Very adorable. My favorite lines are "Now I'm forced to live in a lifelong rut.
Instead of a beautiful tail, I'm stuck with a butt." You have crafted a very fun piece work work! [Consider putting this in a children's book!] :)
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