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Review of In The Beginning  
Review by E.D. Gordon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I'm having a hard time rating your story. I've read it twice and I'm still left wondering, if this is the entire story or is there more to come. Grammar, and formatting is very good, although that is not one of my better areas of expertise. I found it interesting enough to continue reading only because I thought it was leading up to a great story. I'm left feeling it is incomplete. However, taking into account your meeting is the story, I will rate it as such. Good story.
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Review of Flying Low  
Review by E.D. Gordon
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Good read. Other than a couple of words spelled wrong it was well written and a good short story.
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Review by E.D. Gordon
Rated: E | (1.5)
. I like the story, however, I am a bit confused as to the spelling of many words. I'm not sure if it were meant to be that way. lease clarify. Other than that it is a good short story.
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Review of undecided  
Review by E.D. Gordon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I enjoyed your story very much. any story that can keep me interested long enough to continue reading, for me, that's a good story.
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Review by E.D. Gordon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Well written and with much clarity. Good read. From the first paragraph it held my interest.
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Review of No time!!!  
Review by E.D. Gordon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This touched me in a very profound way. It could be because I am from the older generation when social media did not exist at this scale. It could be because it has so much truth. Whatever the reason not often have I read so few words that meant so much. Well done!!
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Review by E.D. Gordon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I found this to be a very interesting read. When I can't wait for the next line, I know it's a good story. I am hoping there is more to come!!!


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