Cool story- it was well written, entertaining and gave a feeling of uneasiness.
I worked in the medical field for 12 years and have always had a love and fascination for anything medical. You captured the language and the feeling of something real and turned it into a nightmare.
I like your writing style, it is inspiring. Good job, keep writing.
Hello Ray, I think this was a very good poem. I like to write in free verse a lot. This is the second writing of yours that I have read, the other one is "Writer's Block", and I think you have a very good writing style, your descriptions give clear, strong visuals and everything is beautifully written.
I don't know why this is the last free verse you'll write, but if you do write more I would love to read it.
Great story! It was very scary and realistic, I was on edge the whole time I was reading it.
I felt myself really relating to the main character, and I could not stand Carolyn! which just means it is very well written.
Everything I love in a good story, nicely done.
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