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Review by Coperniki
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I liked how you put the rhyme scheme in an AA, way all the poem. 1 question: The second to last line "That life I knew is done," should knew be know? Anyways great writing.
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Review of The Journey  
Review by Coperniki
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I honestly have no suggestions to edit, I thought this was well written and provided a lot of detail to where I was watching a movie in my head. Great writing.
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Review of Finale  
Review by Coperniki
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I only do rhyming poems also.. in my opinion they give the best detail. But yea, Very very very brilliant how each stanza with each separate line has to do with another, waves and shores, thoughts and soul, noise and loud, body and mind. This was very good, not to put mine out there but I think you'd enjoy my poem An Important Life. Anyways very...professional, although I am an amateur.
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Review of wounded heart  
Review by Coperniki
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really thought this was good, my normal poems I like are the short stanza 2-4lined, but this was very detailed. I hate to put my own out there but I think you'd enjoy my poem Your Expired Toy, dealing with the same situation. Anyways, perfect in my opinion 5/5
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Review of The Messiah  
Review by Coperniki
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a really good poem, I'm not religious but you put what was in the Bible into really good poetry. Only suggestion and question is if in the first stanza second line if between all and He should be a comma? I have only reviewed very few poems but this was the best yet.
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