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Rated: E | (4.5)
A refreshing perspective, especially from a teenager. (Or at least I'm assuming you're a teenager.) Most kids are way too caught up in what everyone else thinks, it's nice to find someone who thinks for herself. If you can manage to continue to see things with a clear eye, yet not allow yourself to become jaded by what you see, you'll be way ahead of the game.

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Review of From Zero to Hero  
Review by creativegranny
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this piece quite well. It showed the bond of loyalty and love between people and their pets beautifully. I especially liked the twist on the usual loyal animal theme, it was refreshing to have a human shown as the one exhibiting "blind loyalty" for a change.

I only noted a few small things that I would change. first would be to change the second "winter" in the first line to year (it's less redundant). Most of the rest are simple to fix "run-on" sentences that need to be cut in two.

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