Love this piece. I love to think critically and the line that "creation became an image of destruction" really caught my attention. It made me think of hmmmmm what deep philosophical truth could this be. Keep it up.
That was beautiful. I love the metaphor of coming out of a new planet only to find out you were on earth all along but in another world. Really beautiful. I'm a newbie and only have 100 gift points. So I cant give you gift points but i'll be sure to give a badge.
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