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Review of The Memories  
Review by DarTaz
Rated: E | (4.5)
It was impressive. I felt like you were speaking to me in person. This is the kind of material that goes into memoirs.

I don't know if it was intentional but you need to break up the paragraphs. It reminds me of the book I've been writing where I'm not concerned about the spacing until I submit it.

Keep up the good work.
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Review of Stars part 1  
Review by DarTaz
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great content, good visualization. Just need to do a little more basic proofreading.
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