It reminds me of the fairy stories I used to read when I was little. I can imagine a bored princess sitting in a tower even though the imagery isn't excellent. However it is brilliantly written and I do like this piece. It feels rather true to life rather than classic princes story. Nice poem.
I like this poem because it is simple and complex at the same time. I am deeply interested in this style of poetry and I feel that you have really captured a feeling that I can't. However I felt it lacked a little bit of finesse to pull me into the emotion. Nice try though.
I really like this. It sort of confused me in a way but I huess that is part of the mystery of it. I'm really interesting in finding out more about what happened and who they were. I wonder where it was they ended up and why one of the boats didn't make it when the others did. Now I'm hooked.
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