|This poem is without flaw. I am young, but still I can see the beauty and horror in this fragile bond.
The way that you portray the tormented mind of a grieving parent, is astounding. Your words are gentle
as if in a whisper, they are so delicately placed.
And the way that you close the final stanza, it is heartwarmingly heartwrenching. This is truly a piece to
be proud of, although I'm sure my opinion only supports your many awards for said piece. :)
Great work, bravo.