We all fall down and make mistakes and there's an air of honestly in this poem. I quite like it. Raw, unyielding and yet broken. I like that. You can almost ear "Eye of the Tiger." It's also well written and I hope you write more because this very good. A bit short but you make a point and it's a good point. Never give up. Indeed.
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