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Review of June 3--Waiting  
Review by David's Bride
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I like this.

I like how Dana is 30 and single, and how she wants to get out of the town she is living in. The character in my story is almost the same age and also single.

I like the part of "Dana has envied Bobby Joe. She wanted to desperately to flee this dusty hell..."

And just the thought of being in humidity once again makes me want to collapse.

Please review my piece called "The Long Road Around the Corner of Hope." I plan to edit and add on to it in the next day or so.

Write on.

Julia Pope
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