|These are just my thoughts, so please accept them as only my humble opinion and use them as you see fit.
First, I could feel the emotional distress embedded in the piece. You did a wonderful job getting the emotion across to the reader.
I like how you used a "stream of consciousness" way of writing, and even broke the narrative wall to speak directly to the reader. ( "I do get weak, ok.") Your voice comes through very well and it helps the reader feel the power of your distress.
I like the imagery. ("a storm raging inside", "hiding each scar in lies") Really powerful images!
I was confused by the sentence "I need someone to touch their naked soul to open up in honesty to pour out in trust and to reveal their truth." Are you asking someone to share their life with you on a deeper level? Are you wanting to share your own life at that level with someone? Is it someone specific or anyone willing to embrace you as the broken person you are? ( here I am using "you" to mean the narrator of the piece.)
Overall, you did a great job, and I'll listen, anytime you need me to! :)