I loved your poem... it has such wonderful vibes of serenity peeping from each line.
And I especially loved the last stanza:
"Nature speaks when we listen
It will never tell us a lie
I trust what it gives me
All of life was made unique
So let’s answer when it calls to us"
I love Mother Nature since my childhood. Therefore, I am so happy to my love resonating in your poem.
I offer you my best wishes... you are a great poet. That is the truth.
Many congratulations!
What a wonderful composition!
I derived such tremendous vibes of serenity from your poem, especially the last stanza.
Keep it up, please.
Dear Freddy,
Greetings.
I loved this piece.
You have got a great imagination and the four tongues you describe is a beautiful metaphor for the forked tongues that many of us use.
Keep it up.
Wish you all success,
The Uplifting Essayist
Greetings.
What a marvellous piece you have written!
I have enjoyed each word here.
I especially enjoyed the wonderful emotions that a so deeply woven into your text.
Well-done!
Greetings.
What a marvellous story you have composed!
I admire its lovely plot encased within such a poignant setting!
Your tale is short, sweet and deeply touching.
I am sure you have great writing talents.
Greetings.
I loved reading this poignant story.
You have captured the emotions of separation and the resulting grief using so few words, and yet you have managed to do it so vividly.
There lies your artistry... there lies your skill.
Congrats!
Best wishes for more of your success,
The Uplifting Essayist
What a beautiful composition!
I am a deeply spiritual person and I could instantly connect to your vibes.
I best liked this particular line: Grace of God is like a comfortable and peaceful place. Yes, you are 100% right... Grace of God is indeed the most comfortable shelter in the whole of the Universe.
Please keep writing.
With best wishes,
The Uplifting Essayist
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