Well, this is certainly interesting. It sends something happy down my spine, gives a little smile and I don't know why It's very interesting and bright. But sadly, you spelled Lose wrong, unless you meant to. Oh, it's a limerick! Exciting and fun and real. People are stupid sometimes.
Wow, now this is a masterpiece, such symbolism and heart put into this work. I was really pushed forward with this one. I felt the feeling applied to this piece. You are an artist, keep painting. I encourage you to write many more like this and God bless you.
This is one of the most beautiful and sincere poems I've ever read. It really relays your feelings to the audience. I love this style of poetry, it's beautiful and deep. It makes me think and reflect on how others feel about, well, others. Keep up the amazing work, we need good poets like you!
Wow, now this really pulled me in. I really like this. Keep up the good work and good luck with your metamorphosis. Now I really don't understand what metamorphosis you went through, but it seems important and deep. Make sure you have the right encouragement pushing you on. Be courageous, be smart, be strong; don't give up hope! :D