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Review of Our World  
Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.0)
I totally agree with your view of the world. Pray for mercy.
Matthew 6:33
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Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (5.0)
Just a few grammatical errors to point out.
Stanza 1 "sediment" should probably be "sentiment"
Stanza 5 "ones healing" should be "one's healing"
Stanza 6 "a womans best friend" should probably be "a woman's best friend"

Now for the review!
I really like how it just flows. The meanings of the color of roses just blows my mind! I love the similies and metaphors used in this poem. So full of life. God has certainly blessed you with a talent that has blown my mind. God bless you and have a great new year!
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Review by Delanora
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
That was so entertaining. I love how you had so many details and it seemed to transport me there, to where your character was. I certainly enjoyed the thrill. I hope you continue to write like this. God bless you and your talent and drive. Have a great New Year!
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Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.5)
Though I am not the person you are speaking to, I was really moved by this testimony of sorrow. God's not done with you yet. Keep fighting the good fight, Good luck!
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Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this. This style is really intruiging. Tap that untapped talent! God Bless!
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Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.0)
That's cute and exciting. I enjoy the poetic devices used in this poem! Great job and keep up to good work!
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Review of A small poem  
Review by Delanora
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well, this is certainly interesting. It sends something happy down my spine, gives a little smile and I don't know why It's very interesting and bright. But sadly, you spelled Lose wrong, unless you meant to. Oh, it's a limerick! Exciting and fun and real. People are stupid sometimes.
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Review by Delanora
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow, this is so emotional and deep. I admire this poem and the style.
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Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is one of the most beautiful and sincere poems I've ever read. It really relays your feelings to the audience. I love this style of poetry, it's beautiful and deep. It makes me think and reflect on how others feel about, well, others. Keep up the amazing work, we need good poets like you!
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Review of Silhouette  
Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, now this really pulled me in. I really like this. Keep up the good work and good luck with your metamorphosis. Now I really don't understand what metamorphosis you went through, but it seems important and deep. Make sure you have the right encouragement pushing you on. Be courageous, be smart, be strong; don't give up hope! :D
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Review of I'm Not!  
Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh wow! This is so nice! I have a poem like this. I love this! Beautiful.
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Review of THAT'S NICE  
Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting plot line. I don't understand, is this supposed to be longer? I liked it though.
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Review of HUNTING DUALITY  
Review by Delanora
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, now this is beautiful. It's so amazing, reading something like this. I was so compelled to finish reading it. I love this story so much!
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Review of The accident  
Review by Delanora
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Looks fun! Looking forward to reading it!
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Review by Delanora
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Well, the thing was, I didn't really know any of it and I guessed most of it. Fun though!
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