This is very awesome! it's very original, and I enjoyed reading this somewhat-lengthy piece. I found all the characters original, and it made me think of a story my friends and i wrote a long time ago. It's very interesting, and I hope to read other stories similiar!
-Demyx Fairchild
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/demdemy
Generated in 0.09 seconds at 7:18am on Mar 10, 2026 via server WEBX2.