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Review by DemonX115
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Interesting
I'd love to see more done.
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Review by DemonX115
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Interesting. I'd love to see some more progress.
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Review by DemonX115
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Not perfect; however, it's really good so far. With a bit of work in adding to the choices and flexibility of chapters, you'll see it grow much quicker. Characters are okayish, maybe try to leave some things more ambiguous to the reader as they often imagine things their own way anyway.
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Review by DemonX115
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
Not my cup of tea...
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Review by DemonX115
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Decent.
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Review by DemonX115
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good story. Needs more environmental development, though.
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