I think this is funny and veers a little bit toward sarcasm. Although it is short, the poem creates a nice flow. I like how you ended it. It is the second line of the first verse that you have reasoned in the last sentence.
Your writing seems to be a reflection of an exploration of truth and life. You conclude by saying that we should do the right thing, and the rest will follow. I found this to be the most inspirational part as it is a timeless truth.
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