The urgency of the words was good at getting the point across. There's a feeling of being powerless because this is how things are,but at the same time not being a victim.
There isn't anything wrong with this grammer-wise or word chose,but my personal opinion is that the different colors take away from the seriousness of the poem.
Other than that I liked it.
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