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Review by Charcoal
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was such well written! Amazing job on the plot line and the characters! The setting is fantastic with the unique theme. Rei and ores; old man and trickery. The quotes at the beginning and the end of the chapter really set the tone and even add in some foreshowing of what is to come. Who knew greed could be shown in such a way with a girl and her Oreos. Just phenomenal. Ghost of the greedy. Had great parallel structure and flowed nicely. As I kept reading, it continued to pull me in more and more. This would, in all honesty, make an exciting book. I look forward to reading more!
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Review of The Blue Apple  
Review by Charcoal
Rated: E | (4.0)
What an interesting topic! You were able to create a small piece of art revolving around the unseen. Reading threw the perspective of the young boy gave me the determination to prove that this was indeed a blue apple. While everyone around doesn’t, you can stand up for what you belive in even if you are alone. Some of the characters seemed to have that stereotypical personalities: The dad and the brother. Great descriptions for the apple. The story also had a sense of what the group can belive in contrast with the individual. The majority see this as no apple at all, well, no blue apple. The individual boy sees it for what it truly is. Overall, this was a fun and unique story to read!
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