|My friend sent me this way to read your story, and I'm not disappointed in the least! The idea is incredibly original, or I've at least never stumbled upon a character whose ability is to be unmemorable! You could easily craft an entire novel from the concept, by fleshing out events and the such! I hope you one day do consider it, it could make for any age group depending on how it was written--I applaud you!
I noticed a single typo in the very beginning:
"Barry Clemons. You said that my driver's license was read. I'm Barry Clemons."
The second piece of dialogue should have 'ready' instead of 'read'.