Wow, your writing is great. i am guessing you have been doing this for a long time. I am not into that type of story much but it still caught my interest. I would like to give you some usefull critisim but i really cant. your writing was wonderfull. So good infact that i would be honered if you could review the novel excerpt i just posted. my name is donny richter. i would apreciate it.
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