No mask can hide the eyes of truth and from its words all the hidden fall! Wicked word craft my friend truly a piece that makes one think! Bravo!!!...)o(
Death is but the reflection of life its casts the flesh to reveal energy. A ghost of thoughts yet these thoughts buzz within the invisibility of the atom and no longer in the wet-wear of the brain! Your book should be a great read and I love the title! Beautiful beginings and the best of luck for a wonderful end! Bravo!!!...)o(
The sadness and the battle of a love that once was is captured beautifully here! That need to touch truly a demon. Lets just hope as he ages the more energy he can muster to leave that invisible kiss of his devotion. Overall a good read my friend! Bravo!!!...)o(
Too right its hollow! Your words hunger for more than this reality gives, if only the mirror was a door then this world would easily be no-more! I am like your poem sometimes and seek the dream yet each morning when I wake I scream. Overall your word craft is a pleasure to read! Bravo!!!...)o(
Short yet very powerful this your journey of bliss to pain! Love the flow and the cuts it leaves within my thinking mind! All in all a dam good show of a man who loved a whore! Bravo!!!...)o(
Your poem is a great read, a look through the mirror that is the veil of death! It gives the sense of departure but also of hope in that your loved ones are there to see you on through the enigma of life! Beautiful word craft friend! Bravo!!!...)o(
Your poem is the dagger that cuts the heart so many dead to create a better start. You are right in that freedom comes at a great cost but the sad fact is true freedom will never be found! But still we fight on for the greater cause. RESPECT to all who fight, RESPECT to all who have fallen and RESPECT all to the future children who will come to fight at our governments calling! Great writing, keep pushing on friend!!!...)o(
Bravo! What a wonderful message of hard beauty. From the darkness of the I cant to the silver light of I must! This poem touches me, it is well written and a joy to read! Thank you for the share friend!!!...)o(
Death be bliss to some yet a horror to others! Your word craft captures the fear of this once immortal well, for now he/she must commit to the circle of life to feed the mirror of death! Bravo!!!...)o(
The release of emotion this woman got from the sun screams out the words freedom truly! Your words paint the path of confined darkness beautifully and from it the grows the colourful essence of the new day! Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece friend! Bravo!!!...)o(
We are but frequency, casters of the silent tone and not with ear but heart do we truly preform to the dance of love! Your word craft is a treat to read my friend for its message is a beautiful sphere of sound! Bravo!!!...)o(
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