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Review of The Quiet Old Man  
Review by dyxe0ri
Rated: E | (5.0)
This reminded me of Dr Suess books and made me feel happy inside.
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Review of 09/02/12  
Review by dyxe0ri
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! While i'm not a professional, I also write free-verse poetry and this caught my eye.


I have a cat, and all of this is accurate. The wording is beautiful, and mesmerizes the reader. It a poem with shape, and convey's emotion quite well.

My only critique would be to add more punctuation, adding a period right after an important part can do a world of wonders for the sincerity of a poem, or the overall tone.
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Review by dyxe0ri
Rated: E | (4.0)
The wording is absolutely gorgeous, it really draws the reader in! The random capitalization though and the lack of punctuation makes it harder to read and harder to the convey the emotion, just a single comma can really effect the tone! The wording really is amazing though *Heart*
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