E. B. Bloomfield's (ebbloomfield) Reviews

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18 Public Reviews Given

22 Total Reviews Given

Review Style

I'm no professional at reviews. I prefer to say something about the writing style/grammar/flow of the piece, then carry on to what I like about it or how it relates to me right after.

Favorite Genres

Anything that catches my interest in particular. I don't necessarily abide by genres, but if you look at my portfolio and bio, that displays a good clue

Least Favorite Genres

Erotica by far, and not fond of fanfiction either. Not big on controversial pieces, but depending on the topic I could review

I will not review...

Erotica and fanfiction, items of sexual nature.

Public Reviews

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#4639845

Review of Wheat

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

It's difficult to say more than wow. The usage of descriptory words and your scenery creation were excellent, and in under 2500 words you created two entire lifetimes out of two characters. Bravo, terrific story!

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#4633467

Review of Concrete/Abstract Thinking & Fun'ism

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Excellent essay! Although the topic itself can be challenging to grasp, plenty of very handy examples were used to help the reader along, and within those examples and the various subjects within the essay, the concept became much easier to understand and process. I myself had never thought of these differences, and I'm sure I'll be keeping them in mind for a very long while (if not forever), as I'm sure most that read this essay upon its release date years ago still do now.

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#4632917

Review of Over thinking.

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: E | (5.0)

Well written! The poem flows well and has a terrific rhyme scheme, and I love the tale it tells. Too often, we're caught in a cycle of negative emotion that feeds itself, wrought by the past. Your poem does well at encompassing it. Keep writing!

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#4632915

Review of Ant

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: E | (5.0)

This little piece of writing puts into detail, behind each line, far more definition through thought than through reading. So deep are the intricacies of life, how meaningful and wholesome the life of a single insect. Well written and moving!

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#4632914

Review of Poppy

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Brilliantly written, and the graphic and intricate detail sets each scene perfectly! The story well encapsulates the pain in the loss of a loved one, and helps emphasize the gravity of the situation altogether. Wonderful read, and keep writing dear!

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#4632359

Review of My Garden

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: E | (5.0)

Lovely little gardening poem! I enjoyed the read and the flow of it very much.

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#4630650

Review of Born to Die

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: ASR | (4.0)

A bit difficult to follow with the changing line schemes, but otherwise well done and worded. It is a worthy testament to the mind of a soldier preparing himself for battle.

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#4630641

Review of The Caterpillar of Doctor Weiss

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Though there is some room to expand upon your detail within the story, very well done! I enjoyed the attribution of the story to something so simple and the veil that so many people throw over who they are and what they do very much. I feel who we really are and the world surrounding us isn't talked about nearly enough, and I feel this story encapsulates that idea well.

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#4630635

Review of Paradise

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: E | (5.0)

Wonderful poem! I wish more people felt the same about the peace within the woods, away from the bumble of the cities and strife. Gratitude for the world around us is utmost in its appreciation, and it is encapsulated perfectly here.

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#4630021

Review of Night Terrors

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Well written, once again! It's nice to see spins on classic horror staples like werewolves, vampires, and etcetera with more personal character involvement and inner thought behind them. You paint terrific images of the story's scenery and put the reader there, within the character's minds. Lovely short!

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#4630018

Review of On Dragons Wings

Review by E. B. Bloomfield

Rated: E | (5.0)

Lovely little story! The development was very intriguing, and each character mentioned seems well built and interesting in their own right. I would say a job well done, even TV series-esque. I'll be sure to check around more of your stories, and thank you for the read!