Hey, great story, good writing ability. I must confess i want to know what the sound is, sequel please! You are very creative, you sound like a real author, do you have any books or are just online? It would be cool if we knew a little bit more about Fred, at the begining it was slightly hard to realize it was an apartment not a dorm, still, awesome story, and please write a sequel if you haven't already!
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