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Review of Fishin' & Stuff  
Review by ElaineElaine
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Ah, you made me cry. *Smile* I rather enjoyed this little story. I saw only one error,

If I were a minister, which I’d never be ‘cause on Sunday I’d rather be down by the creek waving my feet in the water, feeling the icy cold of the current and squishing the flowing mud through my toes, but if I did have to be were a preacher woman

I think I would have put some sort of hard mention of how old the girl was. Maybe 12? Sometimes I was bothered by a child thinking this advanced, but then, age 12 is heading toward adulthood. Looks like kids start forming a pretty good opinion of God around age 7 and that continues to mature, so, yeah, I'd believe a 12-year-old could have a lot of things figured out.

As I said, I enjoyed.
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