Hey Peony,
This was a pleasant piece to read. I like the concept, I just wish there was more of a form to your story, I wish there was more. You did really great going so in depth, I can really visualize preexistence. All in all, this was a really nice piece. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your work!
Hey Chris,
I really enjoyed reading your piece. I love envisioning how prominently he loves her and the poem has a really nice rhythm. I wanted to see him confess his feelings or know more about their relationship but all in all a really great story told through verse. Keep writing!
I really enjoyed this piece and although having no rhyme, the rhythm in the lines is really nice. As a writer, I feel like I can relate to the exact kind of darkness you're talking about. I can spot few to no grammatical errors. All in all, a really pleasurable poem to read. Keep writing!
I really enjoyed this piece and I'm new myself so I just wanted to say happy writing! I really enjoyed the rhythm of your poem and very much agree with the shame in a secret. All in all, a really pleasant story. What a promising start, keep writing!
I love the support but there are a lot of things I'm unfamiliar with. Some of the instructions to me are unclear but all in all I love writing on hear. It makes me feel comfortable to share my work and give feedback as well. Definitely makes me feel like a better writer
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