*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Creative fun in
the palm of your hand.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/elsabella83
Review Requests: ON
13 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Poem  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning,

Thank you for sharing this poem and allowing me to review it. I was drawn in as soon as I realized it involved a cat. I love cats, and this explains how I feel and see my three. Good job, and keep writing.

J.Legacy
2
2
Review of The Monsters Know  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good Morning,
Thank you for writing this piece and sharing it with us. This is an amazing piece of work. I feel the emotions as I read through it and connect with it. Great job!

J.Legacy
3
3
Review of Man-Wife Dialog  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lightinmind,

Thank you for writing this! It was what I would expect a couple that has been together would sound like. It reminds me of when I was married. The last line had me laughing so hard. Excellent job!

J.Legacy
4
4
Review of The Hunt  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good Evening Kit Macpherson,

Thank you for allowing me to read this story. I enjoyed it a lot. I felt like I was the one running for my life and your detail to describe the horse and rider made it feel so real. The only thing I noticed was "I hearr the baying of the hounds, getting closer by the second." was the spelling of hearr?

Thank you again and great job.
J.Legacy
5
5
Review of Urge  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good Evening Tej,

I found your story through the Read & Review function and I was not disappointed. Thank you for writing this story. I could see the whole thing in my mind and once the knife and blood came it was sickeningly good. (Not sure if that's a word but it was amazing.)

Keep it up,
J.Legacy
6
6
Review of Unbound  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening, Myles abroad,

Thank you for letting me read this through the read & review random pick, and I must say I love this piece a lot. I feel like I was there with them. With the wind in my face and pushing forward. Is the bold letter given to you for the writing? If so, well done.

J.Legacy
7
7
Review of Riptide  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Radioshea

This story was amazing. You had me hooked from beginning to end. Your description of the room and the horrors around her made it feel like I was going through it myself. I love how it ended with them being together until the end. It makes you feel good inside.

J.Legacy
8
8
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,

I love this story! Very well done and told very well in a short amount of words. It also makes me wonder what is going to happen next, and I'm left wanting more and more. I can't wait to see what else you'll come up with. :)

J.Legacy
9
9
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,

I really enjoyed this piece because I can feel it in my own body if that makes sense to you. I feel older every day and can feel the rain coming through my knees. :) I don't read much poetry but this one just makes sense.

Keep it up :)

10
10
Review of Little Chubby  
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kris,

Thank you for posting your story. It was very well done and I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. I love the end where Ingrid saw the squat little tree stand a little bit taller. This made my day. Thank you again for posting.
11
11
Review by J. Legacy
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is the first story that I've been able to read all the way through in a long time. I have no idea about Yu-Gi-Oh! World, but I still enjoy this chapter a lot! I liked the original blurb better than the alternative one, but that's just me. The spacing throughout made it easy to read.
11 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/elsabella83