Thank you for sharing this poem and allowing me to review it. I was drawn in as soon as I realized it involved a cat. I love cats, and this explains how I feel and see my three. Good job, and keep writing.
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Thank you for writing this piece and sharing it with us. This is an amazing piece of work. I feel the emotions as I read through it and connect with it. Great job!
Thank you for writing this! It was what I would expect a couple that has been together would sound like. It reminds me of when I was married. The last line had me laughing so hard. Excellent job!
Thank you for allowing me to read this story. I enjoyed it a lot. I felt like I was the one running for my life and your detail to describe the horse and rider made it feel so real. The only thing I noticed was "I hearr the baying of the hounds, getting closer by the second." was the spelling of hearr?
I found your story through the Read & Review function and I was not disappointed. Thank you for writing this story. I could see the whole thing in my mind and once the knife and blood came it was sickeningly good. (Not sure if that's a word but it was amazing.)
Thank you for letting me read this through the read & review random pick, and I must say I love this piece a lot. I feel like I was there with them. With the wind in my face and pushing forward. Is the bold letter given to you for the writing? If so, well done.
This story was amazing. You had me hooked from beginning to end. Your description of the room and the horrors around her made it feel like I was going through it myself. I love how it ended with them being together until the end. It makes you feel good inside.
I love this story! Very well done and told very well in a short amount of words. It also makes me wonder what is going to happen next, and I'm left wanting more and more. I can't wait to see what else you'll come up with. :)
I really enjoyed this piece because I can feel it in my own body if that makes sense to you. I feel older every day and can feel the rain coming through my knees. :) I don't read much poetry but this one just makes sense.
Thank you for posting your story. It was very well done and I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. I love the end where Ingrid saw the squat little tree stand a little bit taller. This made my day. Thank you again for posting.
This is the first story that I've been able to read all the way through in a long time. I have no idea about Yu-Gi-Oh! World, but I still enjoy this chapter a lot! I liked the original blurb better than the alternative one, but that's just me. The spacing throughout made it easy to read.
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