|I thought this was a good madlib, but I have to say it was very long for a quick exercise for a madlib. I spent a long time entering in words to get to the story.
I don't do madlibs, but the categories were extremely varied. Some parts were terribly specific (ie Jewish Last Name, a French phrase) while others were so general that it was hard to think of what exactly was included in the category (ie substance, noun). The demographic for this madlib is confusing with this broad spectrum of difficulty.
Otherwise, I liked the story the words were put into and I liked where you placed the words in your story.
Keep on writing!