Wow, you just very cleverly broke my heart. I take in every line and catch my breathe at the line 'Where do you go when your life derails?' and then that next line comes 'My tears, unconstrained... and so on' Like a sword piercing flesh, I felt the sting. Your amazing, and this is amazing work. Just a brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, brilliant tale. can't wait to read more of your work Keep it up!
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