Beautifully written. And you are right your never too old to dance. It releases the youth in all of us. I was there with her while she danced. I applauded with the rest as she finished her dance. Excellent work. Sometimes growing old is only a dance away. Keep up the excellent work
Your description leading up to being confronted with Yzebel is excellent. The way you describe each event is greatly detailed. I found each sentence just as exciting as the last. I think you are a gifted artist as well. I found myself living the adventure of this girl right along with her. Very exciting work.
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