I really like this...its unique and well written..i hope to read more of your work......where did you get the inspiration for this? i think it is a good view into a different world and point-of-view....it is kind of sad but i think it is excellent....inspiring....it makes me want to go out and write a poem...! Good job! check my work sometime! Sincerely, Emma Mae Webb
I think that this is a very good story...it struck me deep down...It has an air of mystery about it and I think stories like that are hard to find...Keep it up! excellent information and point of view....reading that story makes me curious as to where you got your inspiration! Check out my work if you have time! Au revoir!
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