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Review of Twin Flame  
Review by Alexandra Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Great Job!!

If anything, maybe a more creative title would be a good idea if you wanted.

It has very nice flow and not awkward and the word choice is great!

The only mistake I found was this: "But with butterflies in my stomach, the ways you make me feel
Lets me know, in my own heart, love is undeniably real"

"Lets" should be "let"

Keep writing!! :)
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