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Review of A love begun  
Review by GEN42
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I was a beautiful prose about maybe a first time together. I am thinking that maybe this man is a hopeless romantic. I love that you are, and to put a piece like this to acknowledge a special moment is exceptional.

I wish you the best of luck in this love life!

Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay, so I have such a dirty mind! *Shock* But truly if it really is about about milk then you came to the right cattle ranchers daughter, it takes me back to a sad/ happy memory for me, and I really appreciate that. I will never drink fresh milk in my hang over fresh off bringing in cattle in my hungover state after watching my auntie and mama fight over blue milk... give me Coors light in my cheerios any day of the week.

Love it!
Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (3.5)
Pretty amusing. I like the thoughtfulness behind the fact that it is a completely viable solution to the world creation... and pokes fun at organized religion. This piece to me signifies that the the catholic church may be ruled by money?? *Think*

Cheers,
Gen
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Review of Butterfly  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (3.5)
I find this interesting and disjointed as though an animal is thinking. I believe animals have random happy thoughts like this, however; it would be interesting what six lines you would come up with that would portray an actual wild animals thoughts for a day, including threat and dusk.

Cheers,
Gen
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Review of Life on Mars  
Review by GEN42
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
This is a great little short. I think my one complaint is in the last line and it may be a matter of opinion, however; "...days I must endure until Philippe and his squad returns or a rescue ship arrives." Returns should be return and I feel there should be a comma after even though it is not grammatically necessary.

Cheers,
Gen
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Review of Criminal Action  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hahaha, *Wink* I thought I had it figured out, but who knew the dog was the other accomplice? I do have to say that I find the line;

"In a burst, the cat rocketed into the living room and jumped on the mantle knocking grandpa’s portrait to the floor with a thud."

a little out of sync as I felt it wasn't in the same POV. But over all I can totally see my pets doing this.

Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is WOW! I can not tell you how well thought out and written this story is. I find the dialogue well thought out and the plot is equally intriguing. I truly enjoyed this short and will be tapping your profile to see what happens next if anything, or if you are done with this line.

Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I think there is great potential here! I can see a few grammatical errors and if you would like I can point them out, but some people are sensitive to this. Otherwise liking the story and e4specially liking the friendly... or maybe not to friendly challenge.
Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
 Any Excuse to Party  (E)
Any excuse to party
#2243450 by GEN42

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Review of Friends  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (4.0)
This rings too true. I have truly felt this way more than once. I will say that when you do find and retain that one or two friendships that last for 20 plus years you realize that you do indeed have a friend. A friend for life!
Cheers,
Gen
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Review of Heavenly Birthday  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree f*** this month. It is truly hard to lose a Grandma, my own Grandmother was here 5 years ago this month and honestly I talk about her all the time, thankfully both my children knew her well.
I feel your despair, but honestly I try to only remember the cool things about her. Hopefully you will remember the great times with your Grandma.
Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I am not some great Poet. I also am not some person even that knowledgeable about poetry; however I liked this prose. It had good flow and I honestly really identified with the last verse and last statement. I honestly do agree that humanity is vain, and after rereading the entire peace it makes more sense to me.
Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I like the beginning of the story; however; I feel like the introduction of characters is stunted and is hard to trace, otherwise I wouldn't pay for the next chapter but I would definately read more!
Cheers,
Gen
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Review of Abandoned Piano  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (4.5)
It evokes a childhood memory of my Granny's piano and it's soul. Not just the woman I remember playing it and teaching my but the two women before her.
Thank you... I mean it.
Cheers,
Gen
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Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (3.5)
Okay you kinda super cute and totally my life until this stupid ass Pandemic, and honesty I am so guilty of your poem, however; I'm not proud of my house which looks clean but isnt...LMAO

I just got a job today and I'm writing, hilarious that I haven't worked for almost ten months and haven't written anything and the day I get a job offer I have poetry and smut to write about... life is funny.
G42
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Review of Let Go  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (3.5)
Super heavy.
Its good and raw, but I feel the story is to raw if your intentions were an emotional dump and bringing me to tears you did a great job, but it isn't a story anyone can grab onto. I love the rawness, I often do the same, and so thank you.
G42
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Review of When I Was A Boy  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh my, it is such an epic ballad. I can only hope somebody can write an epic ballad of me...
much love from Clan McCrea
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Review of A Fun Habit  
Review by GEN42
Rated: E | (3.5)
Man I wish it was that simple now... Stupid, stupid, stupid COVID-19 pandemic, nobody can enjoy a simple weekend like that anymore, however; we can all remember how good it used to be with our families.
Thank you for the the good time memories.
G42
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