One thing about reading for me is that I like to vision the sences in my head as if they're really happening. Reading your work did that for me. I mean it's like a teasing summary to a romantic novel love story that you're just waiting to find out what happens next. It brought up happy and relatable feelings that I share with my boyfriend. Overall good job. Happy to review.
I want to first say you have amazing words and vocabulary usage in this poem. Your words are effortless and meaningful. I love romantic poems and this is one of the best I've seen in a while. Your poem speaks of a strong bond, such as a wedding vow. I loved it. Truly effortless. Good job.